I wrote this piece for
15minuteficlets. I'm still mulling, trying to decide what I think of it.
If anyone's interested in reading it, I'm curious - does it make any sense to you without knowing all the backstory involved? Rob is one of my oldest characters, and I know his story nearly as well as I know my own, so I'm having trouble telling if it works with no prior knowledge of Rob and Andirrim.
Any other crit/comments welcome as well, of course.
If anyone's interested in reading it, I'm curious - does it make any sense to you without knowing all the backstory involved? Rob is one of my oldest characters, and I know his story nearly as well as I know my own, so I'm having trouble telling if it works with no prior knowledge of Rob and Andirrim.
Any other crit/comments welcome as well, of course.
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Date: 2004-03-01 12:49 am (UTC)